Request feedback on new Healing Tao Mission statement

I didn’t mean my list to be a comprehensive re-write (though I think it’s comprehensive enough for Tao USA purposes).

I meant it more as an example of what the thing should look like (clear writing, limited number of thoughts per sentence, cohesive, etc.)

I agree with what michael wrote below, that his original list is more of a compilation of principles than a mission statement, and that the principles in themselves apply more to the alchemical process in an individual’s own practice than to the function of an organization.

As for their clarity, they are crystal clear to me.

As for my list, if you read my post, it was intended as a condensation of what michael wrote, NOT as a mission statement of any sort.